Q: 請問這幾句的文法對嗎><(或有甚麼小地方需修改!?)
以下都是飢餓遊戲相關的
(麻煩要修的話單字不要太難 國中3年級以下的單字><)
1.在那個時候，遊戲創作者宣布此遊戲可以有兩個贏家只要他們是來自同一區的。
At that time, the game maker announces that it can be two winners if they are from the same district.
2.如果是Prim參加這個比賽，她不可能活著回來。
If Prim joins the game,she may not come back alive.
(If文法+用join合適嗎)
3.他們甚至為了這個遊戲創造了"專業貢品"。
They even create “career tributes” for the game.
4.遊戲創作者阻止了他們並選佈他們是贏家。
The game maker stops them and announces they are winners.
5.Katniss自願替代她的妹妹—Prim。
Katniss volunteers to substitute her sister,Prim.
6.她也是細心的，她可以注意到豐饒角周圍有地雷。
And she is also observant, she can notice that there are landmines around the Cornucopia.
7.他不但沒有阻止她還帶走了Prim
He didn’t stop her and took away Prim.
8.他將Katniss改變成"燃燒的女孩"。
He changes Katniss to “girl on fire”.
9.雖然Katniss和Peeta最後都活了下來，但後面仍然有個大難關在等著他們。
Although Katniss and Peeta both stay alive at the end, there still a big problem waiting for them.
10.它讓我知道做我自己就對了!
(完全不會翻)
(麻煩要修的話單字不要太難 國中3年級以下的單字><)
1.在那個時候，遊戲創作者宣布此遊戲可以有兩個贏家只要他們是來自同一區的。
At that time, the game maker announces that it can be two winners if they are from the same district.
2.如果是Prim參加這個比賽，她不可能活著回來。
If Prim joins the game,she may not come back alive.
(If文法+用join合適嗎)
3.他們甚至為了這個遊戲創造了"專業貢品"。
They even create “career tributes” for the game.
4.遊戲創作者阻止了他們並選佈他們是贏家。
The game maker stops them and announces they are winners.
5.Katniss自願替代她的妹妹—Prim。
Katniss volunteers to substitute her sister,Prim.
6.她也是細心的，她可以注意到豐饒角周圍有地雷。
And she is also observant, she can notice that there are landmines around the Cornucopia.
7.他不但沒有阻止她還帶走了Prim
He didn’t stop her and took away Prim.
8.他將Katniss改變成"燃燒的女孩"。
He changes Katniss to “girl on fire”.
9.雖然Katniss和Peeta最後都活了下來，但後面仍然有個大難關在等著他們。
Although Katniss and Peeta both stay alive at the end, there still a big problem waiting for them.
10.它讓我知道做我自己就對了!
(完全不會翻)
最佳解答: 1.在那個時候，遊戲創作者宣布此遊戲可以有兩個贏家只要他們是來自同一區的。
At that time, the game maker announced that there can be two winners if they are from the same district.
敘述故事,以過去式。可以有->there can be
2.如果是Prim參加這個比賽，她不可能活著回來。
If Prim joins the game,she will not come back alive.
may是“有可能”
這句是別人說話,以未來的假設語法（if 現在式, 某人 will ...),所以可以不用過去式
3.他們甚至為了這個遊戲創造了"專業貢品"。
They even created “career tributes” for the game.
用過去式
4.遊戲創作者阻止了他們並選佈他們是贏家。
The game maker stopped them and announced they were winners.
以過去式敘述故事
5.Katniss自願替代她的妹妹—Prim。
Katniss volunteered to sub in for her sister,Prim.
過去式
“代替”某人,用sub in for someone
6.她也是細心的，她可以注意到豐饒角周圍有地雷。
She was also observant, and she could notice that there were land mines around Cornucopia.
"and"的用法錯誤, also 已經有“也”的意思,而且後半句也要有and 連接
can - > 過去式could
Comucopia 地名不需the
7.他不但沒有阻止她還帶走了Prim
Not only did he not stop her, but he also took away Prim.
"not only....but also..."不但...還....
8.他將Katniss改變成"燃燒的女孩"。
He changed Katniss into “The Girl On Fire”.
"change someone into..."將某人改變成....
要加the 別人才知道是"那個"
9.雖然Katniss和Peeta最後都活了下來，但後面仍然有個大難關在等著他們。
Although Katniss and Peeta both lived at the end, there was still a big problem waiting for them.
(stayed alive比較接近重傷/病後保持活著的狀態,這裡直接用lived"存活"比較貼切)
10.它讓我知道做我自己就對了!
It made me understand I should be myself.
(這個故事讓我知道我應該做我自己。）This story told me that I should be myself.
At that time, the game maker announced that there can be two winners if they are from the same district.
敘述故事,以過去式。可以有->there can be
2.如果是Prim參加這個比賽，她不可能活著回來。
If Prim joins the game,she will not come back alive.
may是“有可能”
這句是別人說話,以未來的假設語法（if 現在式, 某人 will ...),所以可以不用過去式
3.他們甚至為了這個遊戲創造了"專業貢品"。
They even created “career tributes” for the game.
用過去式
4.遊戲創作者阻止了他們並選佈他們是贏家。
The game maker stopped them and announced they were winners.
以過去式敘述故事
5.Katniss自願替代她的妹妹—Prim。
Katniss volunteered to sub in for her sister,Prim.
過去式
“代替”某人,用sub in for someone
6.她也是細心的，她可以注意到豐饒角周圍有地雷。
She was also observant, and she could notice that there were land mines around Cornucopia.
"and"的用法錯誤, also 已經有“也”的意思,而且後半句也要有and 連接
can - > 過去式could
Comucopia 地名不需the
7.他不但沒有阻止她還帶走了Prim
Not only did he not stop her, but he also took away Prim.
"not only....but also..."不但...還....
8.他將Katniss改變成"燃燒的女孩"。
He changed Katniss into “The Girl On Fire”.
"change someone into..."將某人改變成....
要加the 別人才知道是"那個"
9.雖然Katniss和Peeta最後都活了下來，但後面仍然有個大難關在等著他們。
Although Katniss and Peeta both lived at the end, there was still a big problem waiting for them.
(stayed alive比較接近重傷/病後保持活著的狀態,這裡直接用lived"存活"比較貼切)
10.它讓我知道做我自己就對了!
It made me understand I should be myself.
(這個故事讓我知道我應該做我自己。）This story told me that I should be myself.
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